Teacher Feedback on Blog

You MUST remember that your blog is assessed by examiners and therefore needs to be academic at all times.
Your ideas are interesting and present an opportunity to create a video that is full of beautifully composed and lit shots. It is very important to plan in detail what you intend to film to ensure that this happens.
Your blog needs the auteur presentations embedding, it needs props, costume, location details with visuals. It needs some address to Goodwin through an analysis of a music video and more evidence of influences.
It is also really important to have some evidence of the initial ideas for your magazine ad and your digipak.
Good work so far, keep going.

Pitch Feedback

storyboard is coming along nicely, our pitch was okay some minor improvements are needed which can be achieved easily. some real narrative needs to be established and confusion over the performance will be solved soon.

MoOdBoArD

Props

We will need instruments for the performance part of the video. We already have access to a florescent pink guitar, so we only need a microphone and drums.

For the other scenes we would need stuff like alcohol bottles, tents, and other scenery.

hadouken get smashed gatecrash

We want to use some elements from this video since our song is about alcohol and this video shows people going out and just getting drunk and clubs. We want to have parts of our video like this.

Ideas

Party in the woods
Performance in the woods
Filming around town, handheld camera
Colourful clothes/ instruments
Colourful filters
Other stuff

Lyrics

The lyrics to our chosen song our as follows:

Well everyday's just a little strange, cause it's this and that,
and "I can't explain," 'cause we're down and up.
We're still lurking after clubs shut the door,
no one's tired and we can go some more
because we're down and up.

Living's so detrimental to the lives that live for no one:
we're so electric till it's gone.

Living like trash never felt so good,
just remember it's only chemicals,
because we're down and up.
Stumble around like it's some kind of trick,
pulling one in when you're bottlesick,
because we're down and up, up and down and up.

Living's so detrimental to the lives that live for no one:
we're so electric till it's gone.

Hey, just look around this old town-
so much debauchery's going on;
these city streets aren't ordinary,
bathroom kids say "What's the story?" and they lie.

Because it's positively posh chemistry. Positively filthy chemistry

They seem to be about alcohol and drugs, and going to clubs. We will probably base our video around this

WELCOME

Our group is consisting of the people of the group. We are Jack, Chris and Ben. We are going to pitch for Chemistry - The Adored.