Teacher Feedback on Blog

You MUST remember that your blog is assessed by examiners and therefore needs to be academic at all times.
Your ideas are interesting and present an opportunity to create a video that is full of beautifully composed and lit shots. It is very important to plan in detail what you intend to film to ensure that this happens.
Your blog needs the auteur presentations embedding, it needs props, costume, location details with visuals. It needs some address to Goodwin through an analysis of a music video and more evidence of influences.
It is also really important to have some evidence of the initial ideas for your magazine ad and your digipak.
Good work so far, keep going.